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Smile like you mean it

Pretend it's all a dream

Don't let the world see you break

Don't let them hear you scream

You don't know where your mind is

It's somewhere out of reach

And if they see you crumble

Like a choir they will preach;

Attention whore, pitiful, waste of space

They'll scorn and mock

and kick dirt in your face

and when those voices fill you with fear and dread

Just smile and remember that

It's All In Your Head.
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haakon95 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
"and if they see you crumble

Like a choir they will preach;

Attention whore, pitiful, waste of space"

Thank u, i really agrreee! ><
thanks for the so called "fake emo" i know emo isnt about cuttign and stuff i am emo myself sord of for my clothes and my taste of music...but still they are taking it all...they are duing it for attention! so people who needs helo can't get takesn seriasly!
fuck you world!

Love your poem
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ILoveTrig Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Student General Artist
The first four lines... my life...
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Tayla19 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The first four lines describe my life PERFECTLY. Beautiful
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rachel163735 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Student Artist
Thats' really pretty! It's true though...you jsut gotta smile through it not let otehr people know what your thinking!
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koroku-ice-princess Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like it, though I feel the flow isn't always consistent.
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CimmySky-10 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's beautiful. I cried while reading this it sounds exactly like me...
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LaurelsARainbow Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012   General Artist
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CimmySky-10 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^^ That made me feel much better ^^
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ganesh893 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
First two lines , define my life!!!!! :)
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